Honestly I didn't think it was all that bad.
The only complaint I have is that there wasn't really any emotion in the voices. If I shut my eyes and just listened to it play, it would be like a book on tape. It has a dull edge to it.
Other than that, I applaud you for the work you put in. Keep it up bro.
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